Comment from bonespur

Excellent

This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The rhyming scheme seems good and the subject matter interesting. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024

Thank you

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a sweet natured poem and these few words paved the way to finding love and wondering if we are luck enough to be loved, I enjoyed this well rhymed poem for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024

Thank you so much Dolly 🙂

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Ah, now this is a very interesting piece of poetry. I like the ending coming back around to mirror the beginning. Smart idea. It has good presentation and simple classic feel. A very strong entry. Good luck in the voting.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024

Thanks so much

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

I probably de-petaled dozens if not hundreds of flowers this way in my younger days. Your poem stirred up memories dormant for decades!
Nicely done.
Julie
:-)

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024

Thank you so much