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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Bill
This is a very well written and illustrated haiku. I like the original metaphor of each season as its own kingdom with the their rising
and falling a pun for the leaves falling and returning.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
P S I just published a book that is now available on Amazon.com.
It is titled The Interloper (and other stories in prose and poetry.
by Joan Pechter.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hi Bill
This is a very well written and illustrated haiku. I like the original metaphor of each season as its own kingdom with the their rising
and falling a pun for the leaves falling and returning.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
P S I just published a book that is now available on Amazon.com.
It is titled The Interloper (and other stories in prose and poetry.
by Joan Pechter.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I'll get a copy. : )
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Thanks, Bill.
Joan
Comment from mrsmajor
This was a beautiful entry for the contest, Bill, the picture and the words matched well...The idea of people and nature came through to me...Thanks for sharing,
All the best to you!
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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This was a beautiful entry for the contest, Bill, the picture and the words matched well...The idea of people and nature came through to me...Thanks for sharing,
All the best to you!
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Victoria, for the kind review and the sixth star. Bill
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You're very welcome, Bill, it was my pleasure...I enjoyed the entry...
Victoria
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It was indeed..My pleasure!
Hugs,
Victoria
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Autumn is my favorite season for the exact reasons you described in this poem. The rich colors. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Autumn is my favorite season for the exact reasons you described in this poem. The rich colors. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Barbara.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Fantastic haiku for the contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Lovely presentation. I like the juxtaposition of the land seasons and humans.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Fantastic haiku for the contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Lovely presentation. I like the juxtaposition of the land seasons and humans.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Gypsy
Comment from mermaids
Your words and your pic remind me of hiking in New Hampshire. Autumn is my favorite season and you make the leaves and trees come alive in your words. I like the line "kingdoms fall and rise again." It shows Autumn in action. Excellent haiku form and use of words.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Your words and your pic remind me of hiking in New Hampshire. Autumn is my favorite season and you make the leaves and trees come alive in your words. I like the line "kingdoms fall and rise again." It shows Autumn in action. Excellent haiku form and use of words.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thank you, M
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Bill. You did a wonderful job penning this exceptional Haiku. The flow of this verse was well crafted and the theme was seasonal and well chosen. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Hello Bill. You did a wonderful job penning this exceptional Haiku. The flow of this verse was well crafted and the theme was seasonal and well chosen. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Melissa, for giving this a look.
Comment from Boogienights
I absolutely love this poem, both your descriptive words and the colors you used to present it. I like the idea of the seasons dressing up for the change. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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I absolutely love this poem, both your descriptive words and the colors you used to present it. I like the idea of the seasons dressing up for the change. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you, BN
Comment from jim vecchio
Fall always takes away my joy from summer and never really seems to promise me the pendulum will swing back again. So, I might as well find pleasure in this and a whole site full of autumn poems honoring its return.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Fall always takes away my joy from summer and never really seems to promise me the pendulum will swing back again. So, I might as well find pleasure in this and a whole site full of autumn poems honoring its return.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I just hate when winter comes and makes transporting my wife harder.
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Please forgive my tardiness in replying. I have had much trouble with my wheelchair and could not spend much time on the site for a few days. I am thankful for your words and works.
Comment from nomi338
Hail the unstoppable assault of seasonal change, hail, snow, rain, growth, leaves falling, rinse and repeat. Birth, growth, maturity, old age, eventual death, again, rinse and repeat. Such are the stages of life.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Hail the unstoppable assault of seasonal change, hail, snow, rain, growth, leaves falling, rinse and repeat. Birth, growth, maturity, old age, eventual death, again, rinse and repeat. Such are the stages of life.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Autumn means more to me nowadays than before.
Comment from royowen
I think maybe some will rise again in an another form like the Roman Empire morphed into the Holy Roman Empire, this is beautifully written, a love piece of artwork, well done Bill, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I think maybe some will rise again in an another form like the Roman Empire morphed into the Holy Roman Empire, this is beautifully written, a love piece of artwork, well done Bill, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Roy
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