Bare footed 'N Pregnant.
Young dumb and pregnant.2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is a pity that we see sin in a young girl being pregnant and the stigma will always exist as we want young girls to enjoy their childhood. A well written and poignant post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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It is a pity that we see sin in a young girl being pregnant and the stigma will always exist as we want young girls to enjoy their childhood. A well written and poignant post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you: I only see' em - as I write 'em; poetry, got that affect on me.
Comment from HarryT
I really enjoyed this poem. It flows well and the repeated verse serves the pacing well. The structure works and images are strong. The poem drips with and accented, judgmental tone which I found intriguing. Good job! Keep writing, glad it ain't new to you.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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I really enjoyed this poem. It flows well and the repeated verse serves the pacing well. The structure works and images are strong. The poem drips with and accented, judgmental tone which I found intriguing. Good job! Keep writing, glad it ain't new to you.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thanks! For your kind review, glad you enjoyed this piece.
