Princess
Another try at children's writing2 total reviews
Comment from Jacob1395
The rhyme in this poem was done really well and I could picture the scene in my mind as I was reading it. I also thought your writing flowed really smoothly and I was kept really engaged. An excellent piece, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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The rhyme in this poem was done really well and I could picture the scene in my mind as I was reading it. I also thought your writing flowed really smoothly and I was kept really engaged. An excellent piece, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your rhymes here and your sentiments of this Princess on her throne looking down on her subjects. The metre is a bit uneven, but I enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed your rhymes here and your sentiments of this Princess on her throne looking down on her subjects. The metre is a bit uneven, but I enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.