2024 Gypsy's Tanka
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7 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Stars in a bottle, what a magical thought this inspires, Gypsy. Peace and serenity also come to mind when I read this incredible piece, my friend. I will be playing catch-up for the next couple of days as my internet was out for a while.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Stars in a bottle, what a magical thought this inspires, Gypsy. Peace and serenity also come to mind when I read this incredible piece, my friend. I will be playing catch-up for the next couple of days as my internet was out for a while.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm sorry your internet was out . It can be hard.
Gypsy 😊
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It was rough, lol. My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
stars in a bottle. . . never heard that before. . . sounds cool!
i love the second line "ferry my love with the ebb"
a great tanka with cool imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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stars in a bottle. . . never heard that before. . . sounds cool!
i love the second line "ferry my love with the ebb"
a great tanka with cool imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Katiemae1977
Gosh how I love a good tanka! This one is delightful. You got to remember how old school I am with haiku and tanka but reading yours is getting me more used to the modern style. Sorry I'm out of sixes!
What a great gift! The stars in a bottle!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Gosh how I love a good tanka! This one is delightful. You got to remember how old school I am with haiku and tanka but reading yours is getting me more used to the modern style. Sorry I'm out of sixes!
What a great gift! The stars in a bottle!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Beauty surrounds this poem. The poem itself, the presentation, and the meaning. It causes this reader a very peaceful feeling. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Beauty surrounds this poem. The poem itself, the presentation, and the meaning. It causes this reader a very peaceful feeling. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful and philosophical verses based on Zen Buddhism, which certainly makes one reflect on life and even death. I think we are all connected, and that we share common attributes. If we remember this, our world would be a better place.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Beautiful and philosophical verses based on Zen Buddhism, which certainly makes one reflect on life and even death. I think we are all connected, and that we share common attributes. If we remember this, our world would be a better place.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from royowen
As always, one has to admire your use of language Gypsy, and considering English is a second language, better than most whose first language is English, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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As always, one has to admire your use of language Gypsy, and considering English is a second language, better than most whose first language is English, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Welcome
Comment from lyenochka
The sky in a blue bottle? I guess the sky is reflected in the bottle or the color of the bottle symbolizes the sky. I'm sure the beloved is equally eager to see her!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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The sky in a blue bottle? I guess the sky is reflected in the bottle or the color of the bottle symbolizes the sky. I'm sure the beloved is equally eager to see her!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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It's a zen concept that everything in nature is connected... the sky, the ocean, the land, humans, animals, bottle....
Thank you very much, big sister
Besitos y abrazos
Marival ❤️
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It's a zen concept that everything in nature is connected... the sky, the ocean, the land, humans, animals, bottle....
Thank you very much, big sister
Besitos y abrazos
Marival ❤️