Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

When the day has ended and the moon shines, we retire to bed and hope to have a peaceful sleep, your words are soothing and peaceful, love Dolly x x x x

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024

Thank you

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

This is such a nice poem. I like the words you used:;sprinkling silver stardust. The picture matches your poem well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024

Thank you

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem that meets the criteria given. It is well written and presented with strong imagery. Its theme is perhaps classic, but never boring.
RJ

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024

Thank you

reply by RJ Heritage on 31-Aug-2024

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A magical stardust scene skilfully captured in your 24 syllable verse with excellent alliteration. I like the way the stardust also illuminates the way home. One edit - flow(i)ng.
Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024

Thank you

Comment from Kristen Thomason

Excellent

Great job! I love the imagery. I can clearly see the night sky as described in the poemand it's very clear and concise. Thank you for sharing- I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024

Thank you