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the Choices

the choces in the U.S. Election

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Comment from bonespur
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This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The structure and syllable count seem good, and the subject matter interresting. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
    thanks a lot
reply by bonespur on 09-Sep-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from lyenochka
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Yes, I agree. Comparing the two conventions with the RNC spouting hate and fearmongering while the DNC was full of uplifting joy and support for the preservation of democracy. The choice is clear.
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
    thanks just edited it a bit had the wrong count.
reply by lyenochka on 31-Aug-2024
    I guess it depends on whether you count "fascism" as two or three syllables. Both are possible. You might want to make a note.