Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's a wonderful meditation on that reassuring psalm. I like how different your talk on it. Martin Luther based A Mighty Fortress Is Our God on that same psalm. You focused on the peace in His presence.
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a beautiful poem in just twenty-four syllables. I liked that you were inspired by that Bible verse. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought your words beautifully capture the beauty found in stillness. The way you share this sense of peace is truly moving. It's a lovely reminder of the tranquility that can be found within ourselves.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

A quiet, restful place is a good place to find and talk with God. You can talk to Him without distractions.
This is a lovely 24 syllable poem. Best wishes in the contest.
Katharine

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2024

Comment from Sarah Probe S.

Excellent

very spiritual powerful words of love and wisdom. this is inspiring holiness. thank you for the lovely poem. i really hope you win the contest,
best wishes.
Sarah

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2024