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Self-knowledge

So many ego-defence layers to penetrate if seeking the truth

2 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I think understanding ourselves is a big challenge and knowing who we are is essential to happiness. I think many will identify with your words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from Jes Derry
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The repetition of "diving deep inside my head" suggests to the reader that it isn't an easy thing to do. The poet confirms this and suggests it's a battle with one's self. I think this was well written and I liked the subject matter. I would just have liked to have read more.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thanks, Jess. I had to adhere to the limitations of the Contest.
reply by Jes Derry on 30-Aug-2024