We have a hitch on our car
Childhood innocence8 total reviews
Comment from Harry Craft
LOL! This was a great poem! I love it. How the innocence of a child can light up a room and send everyone into laughter! A nice poem with a great message. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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LOL! This was a great poem! I love it. How the innocence of a child can light up a room and send everyone into laughter! A nice poem with a great message. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from jake cosmos aller
ahh the words of innocent child who say the darkness things at time. I like the image chosen as it reflects the poem's whimsical and poignant mood very well
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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ahh the words of innocent child who say the darkness things at time. I like the image chosen as it reflects the poem's whimsical and poignant mood very well
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Precious Memory contest. It makes perfect sense that if you have a hitch on your car you are perfectly able to take whatever you want with you wherever you go lol Very cute story put in rhyme form. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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An excellent entry for the Precious Memory contest. It makes perfect sense that if you have a hitch on your car you are perfectly able to take whatever you want with you wherever you go lol Very cute story put in rhyme form. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much
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Thank you so much
Comment from gansach
This is a good entry for the Precious Memory poetry competition. I love stories of the funny sayings young children make in their innocent misunderstandings. I have saved a bunch from my daughter and grandson that I read through once in awhile and chuckle about. Your nephew's is so cute. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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This is a good entry for the Precious Memory poetry competition. I love stories of the funny sayings young children make in their innocent misunderstandings. I have saved a bunch from my daughter and grandson that I read through once in awhile and chuckle about. Your nephew's is so cute. Nicely done!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Good luck with your entry. I am surprised how so few found the challenge of interest. Yours is the only one so far though there are three ithers under construction. That said I was reminded of a memory I'll take to pen.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Good luck with your entry. I am surprised how so few found the challenge of interest. Yours is the only one so far though there are three ithers under construction. That said I was reminded of a memory I'll take to pen.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
I like this poem about the things that come from the mouths of babes. Thinking that things are the same in death as they are in life. I like the way you use the ungrammatical way the children speak in your quote.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day
Joan
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Hi
I like this poem about the things that come from the mouths of babes. Thinking that things are the same in death as they are in life. I like the way you use the ungrammatical way the children speak in your quote.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day
Joan
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much Joan
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You are most welcome.
Joan
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Comment from Begin Again
Innocence through the eyes of a child! They see things so differently than we do. Your poem was adorable and a pleasure to read. Thank you for the smile.
smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Innocence through the eyes of a child! They see things so differently than we do. Your poem was adorable and a pleasure to read. Thank you for the smile.
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much 🙂
Comment from Shanbreen
Through the eyes of the innocent... Yes, when you have a hitch you can drag anything to your afterlife. The Pharaoh did it, why can't we?
I can imagine this being a memory of a wonderful moment in time.
Well done. Best for the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Through the eyes of the innocent... Yes, when you have a hitch you can drag anything to your afterlife. The Pharaoh did it, why can't we?
I can imagine this being a memory of a wonderful moment in time.
Well done. Best for the contest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much 🙂