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A Poetic Idiot's Approach to Idioms

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Poems Based on Idioms!

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Comment from Jacob1395
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This is quite an emotive piece about giving up alcohol. I do like a drink every now and again, but I never go mad. I know some people who definitely drink far too much. An excellent, well written piece. I thought it was really well written.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024

Comment from SimianSavant
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But wonder why I'm writing in this in my room, alone. <= was the first "in" intentional?

This is a powerful one, and a question I certainly ask. Was Jesus much into drinking? Looks like maybe his buddies were. Was he around long enough to watch his friends dropping off from alcohol poisoning? My generation drank a lot, but these lame genZ kids with their limp D politics and low procreation drink less.

If you're 90, maybe you're still young enough to go to a dive bar, order a spritzer, and get down. It just FEELS a lot more lame doing it sober. Maybe that's why the younger generation is way more into pot.

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 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024