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Pebbles

Remember the ripples.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-5-5, Pebbles, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that even small plops can make waves that will be seen or felt a long ways away.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
    Thank you Bill :)
Comment from jessizero
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I enjoyed this poem. The "smiles can travel miles" line was great. You also got the syllable count right for the contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
    Thank you Jessi :)