haiku (lemon suite)
haiku suite11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Lemon Suite, has the proper formatting and presents both the fruity produce from the trees and the power source of all nature, the bees which buzz about. Cool.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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This 5-7-5, Lemon Suite, has the proper formatting and presents both the fruity produce from the trees and the power source of all nature, the bees which buzz about. Cool.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you for this lovely review
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent suite of haikus concerning the growth and development of a harvest of lemons. Well thought through with the setting out. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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An excellent suite of haikus concerning the growth and development of a harvest of lemons. Well thought through with the setting out. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Thank you for this lovely review
Comment from Pearl Edwards
.I like the constant of the bees bussing about as the lemon tree bursts with blossom, the fruit forms, the lemons grow, the fruit is picked. The bees have a big part in our food production. Goodluck in the contest, well written.
cheers
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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.I like the constant of the bees bussing about as the lemon tree bursts with blossom, the fruit forms, the lemons grow, the fruit is picked. The bees have a big part in our food production. Goodluck in the contest, well written.
cheers
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Thank you for getting
my haiku, this the response I was looking for. Nature intertwines
Comment from Begin Again
And where would we be without those busy little bees... They are such hard workers and bring life to our gardens. A very nice set of haikus. Thank you for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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And where would we be without those busy little bees... They are such hard workers and bring life to our gardens. A very nice set of haikus. Thank you for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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I am bee lover too! Thank you so much for this lovely review
Comment from zanya
It's a great title charting the season of the lemon tree and its fruit and the parallel activity in the natural world of the bee = great pic and has my vote -thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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It's a great title charting the season of the lemon tree and its fruit and the parallel activity in the natural world of the bee = great pic and has my vote -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Well, make my day! Thank you so much for this exceptional review. I am thrilled you like my lemons and bees.
Comment from Sally Law
A wonderful classic haiku as specified for the contest. Beautifully written and illustrated. I'm lemon crazy so this was pretty pleasing in this uniquely styled offering.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes in the upcoming vote.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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A wonderful classic haiku as specified for the contest. Beautifully written and illustrated. I'm lemon crazy so this was pretty pleasing in this uniquely styled offering.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes in the upcoming vote.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for the lovely review. I am lemon crazy too.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You created a lively buzzing scene in your poems here and I could hear the bees buzzing and attending to their duties, a joy to read and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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You created a lively buzzing scene in your poems here and I could hear the bees buzzing and attending to their duties, a joy to read and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Dolly. It means the world to me
Comment from pome lover
very nice. The reader can just picture the blossoms and the lemons, and even almost hear the bees.
Good last line.
Best of luck in the Haiku contest.
Katharine
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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very nice. The reader can just picture the blossoms and the lemons, and even almost hear the bees.
Good last line.
Best of luck in the Haiku contest.
Katharine
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for the lovely review
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you're most welcome.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your haiku series beautifully captures the essence of a sun-drenched citrus grove, painting a vivid picture with simple yet effective imagery. The repetition of "the bees buzz about" creates a rhythmic continuity that ties the three haikus together, giving the reader a sense of the grove's lively atmosphere. Each haiku stands strong on its own while contributing to the overall scene, which is not an easy balance to achieve.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Your haiku series beautifully captures the essence of a sun-drenched citrus grove, painting a vivid picture with simple yet effective imagery. The repetition of "the bees buzz about" creates a rhythmic continuity that ties the three haikus together, giving the reader a sense of the grove's lively atmosphere. Each haiku stands strong on its own while contributing to the overall scene, which is not an easy balance to achieve.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Well, this is an amazing haiku review. You have no idea how few people on this site "get" haiku. You really got the "mood" I was trying to create. This review made my day. Thank you
Comment from nancyjam
This is a nice Haiku suite for the contest. Those bees just can't stay away.
From the blossom to the basket full of lemons they're in heaven.
I am too when I smell them.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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This is a nice Haiku suite for the contest. Those bees just can't stay away.
From the blossom to the basket full of lemons they're in heaven.
I am too when I smell them.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the lovely review. Bees and lemons are so important