Spring Creatures
Haiku Suite contest8 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
An eye-catching visual with that beautiful splash of red against the green. This makes me long for spring again. Some great alliteration too throughout and an excellent entry for this contest. Just one edit: cap(tu)red. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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An eye-catching visual with that beautiful splash of red against the green. This makes me long for spring again. Some great alliteration too throughout and an excellent entry for this contest. Just one edit: cap(tu)red. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Spring Creatures, has the proper formatting and allows that the combination of the ladybug, bee, and spider must assuredly mark the beginning of spring.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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This 5-7-5, Spring Creatures, has the proper formatting and allows that the combination of the ladybug, bee, and spider must assuredly mark the beginning of spring.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
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Comment from gansach
This is a very nice entry for the 5-7-5 Nature Haiku Suite writing prompt competition. It has a lovely presentation, very inviting to the reader. Each one has a wonderful description of our little garden friends. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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This is a very nice entry for the 5-7-5 Nature Haiku Suite writing prompt competition. It has a lovely presentation, very inviting to the reader. Each one has a wonderful description of our little garden friends. Nicely done!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
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Comment from Julie Helms
This is such a sweet haiku suite entry about spring, with an adorable picture to match!
One error:
hearts caputred
(captured)
Best of luck!
Julie
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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This is such a sweet haiku suite entry about spring, with an adorable picture to match!
One error:
hearts caputred
(captured)
Best of luck!
Julie
:-).....
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
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Comment from royowen
What a sweet suite of haiku, it's a very delicately written set of well written poetic stanzas, the ladybirds are very intriguing and seem to natural enemies of aphids, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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What a sweet suite of haiku, it's a very delicately written set of well written poetic stanzas, the ladybirds are very intriguing and seem to natural enemies of aphids, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
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Comment from Jacob1395
You can really tell it's spring when we begin to see these creatures out and about. I've always liked ladybirds, but not when there are tons and tons to them like we sometimes get in our house in the summer. A well written piece. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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You can really tell it's spring when we begin to see these creatures out and about. I've always liked ladybirds, but not when there are tons and tons to them like we sometimes get in our house in the summer. A well written piece. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
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Comment from Katiemae1977
Excellent entry in the haiku suite contest. A reason for spring is a great repeating line.
In your first haiku I think you means ladybug not ladybird.
Great job and best wishes!
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Excellent entry in the haiku suite contest. A reason for spring is a great repeating line.
In your first haiku I think you means ladybug not ladybird.
Great job and best wishes!
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written nature haiku about spring. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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This is a very beautiful and well written nature haiku about spring. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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you are so welcome! Blessings, Teri