Forest Peace
The enjoyment of walking alone in a peaceful place.2 total reviews
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This haiku captures the serene beauty of nature and the solace found in a peaceful environment. The imagery of the "fall sun" and "leaf mosaic" evokes a vivid sense of autumn and tranquility. The repetition of "In God's peaceful place" effectively emphasizes the theme of finding refuge and calm in nature.
The structure is strong, with each stanza contributing to the overall sense of serenity and introspection. The choice of words, like "hypnotic rhythm" and "mindful solitude," enhances the meditative quality of the poem.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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This haiku captures the serene beauty of nature and the solace found in a peaceful environment. The imagery of the "fall sun" and "leaf mosaic" evokes a vivid sense of autumn and tranquility. The repetition of "In God's peaceful place" effectively emphasizes the theme of finding refuge and calm in nature.
The structure is strong, with each stanza contributing to the overall sense of serenity and introspection. The choice of words, like "hypnotic rhythm" and "mindful solitude," enhances the meditative quality of the poem.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the excellent review. I'm sorry I already used my six nominations.
Comment from BOO ghost
This is splendid! The autumn leaves decorate the forest canopy. Almost feels like I am in this picture. The colors are vibrant! Fall is a pretty season.
Fall sun filters through
Leaf mosaic on the path
In God's peaceful place
BOO always picks a favorite quatrain. But I keep my religion private. I may not be religious. Bravo!
BOO!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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This is splendid! The autumn leaves decorate the forest canopy. Almost feels like I am in this picture. The colors are vibrant! Fall is a pretty season.
Fall sun filters through
Leaf mosaic on the path
In God's peaceful place
BOO always picks a favorite quatrain. But I keep my religion private. I may not be religious. Bravo!
BOO!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thanks for the read and feedback. Thanks too for the BOO!
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Just posted a short episode of a chapter if you're interested. It's eerie spooky.
BOO!