Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "New connections"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
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Comment from amosajames
I'm intrigued to learn more of Manuel's recourse due to the unfortunate trap he has put himself in. His wife clearly has a stranglehold hold on him using sex as a vital weapon, although I doubt she loves him and Manuel may just crack despite her beauty and wiles in the bedroom. One the stews breaks the back what will happen when Manuel realizes he has other holds on him- The Connors.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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I'm intrigued to learn more of Manuel's recourse due to the unfortunate trap he has put himself in. His wife clearly has a stranglehold hold on him using sex as a vital weapon, although I doubt she loves him and Manuel may just crack despite her beauty and wiles in the bedroom. One the stews breaks the back what will happen when Manuel realizes he has other holds on him- The Connors.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your insights. I appreciate all comments good and constructive.
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Comment from BOO ghost
I read, you have a big imagination! Guess writing is a funnel to express vivid imagination and emotions. BOO is reading...make sure paragraphs are evenly spaced. Try to write short paragraphs. This is a well written episode. I know that a lot of love went into this, my best suggestion, as I tell all prose writers, is to use Show when applicable. Rather than tell. It held my interest! Good luck finishing your masterpiece.
BOO!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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I read, you have a big imagination! Guess writing is a funnel to express vivid imagination and emotions. BOO is reading...make sure paragraphs are evenly spaced. Try to write short paragraphs. This is a well written episode. I know that a lot of love went into this, my best suggestion, as I tell all prose writers, is to use Show when applicable. Rather than tell. It held my interest! Good luck finishing your masterpiece.
BOO!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you BOO ! I take all input into consideration!
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