Rebirh
Flying high.2 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
One of God's great wonders is the Milky Way on a clear, crisp night during any meteor shower. Please check this line: out the window in ah (awe). What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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One of God's great wonders is the Milky Way on a clear, crisp night during any meteor shower. Please check this line: out the window in ah (awe). What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thanks for having my back. I will check that out. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your poem beautifully captures the essence of curiosity and the boundless nature of imagination. The imagery of looking up at the night sky and dreaming of life beyond Earth feels both whimsical and introspective. I especially like how you transition from being "earthbound" to taking off in your imagination, which reflects the limitless possibilities our minds can create. The phrase "glaring out the window in ah" seems to capture the awe one might feel when exploring the unknown, though "in awe" might be a clearer expression. The ending, where you become a reporter in your "world of wonder," ties everything together nicely, emphasizing the importance of documenting and sharing these imaginative journeys. Overall, it's a delightful piece that invites readers to explore the universe with you.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Your poem beautifully captures the essence of curiosity and the boundless nature of imagination. The imagery of looking up at the night sky and dreaming of life beyond Earth feels both whimsical and introspective. I especially like how you transition from being "earthbound" to taking off in your imagination, which reflects the limitless possibilities our minds can create. The phrase "glaring out the window in ah" seems to capture the awe one might feel when exploring the unknown, though "in awe" might be a clearer expression. The ending, where you become a reporter in your "world of wonder," ties everything together nicely, emphasizing the importance of documenting and sharing these imaginative journeys. Overall, it's a delightful piece that invites readers to explore the universe with you.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for that lovely review.
