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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Wounded hearts are definitely a problem even with a beautiful harvest moon. This poem is very emotional. Thank you for sharing this poem and presentation with us. Wonderful job.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Katiemae1977
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Makes me want to weep for the wounded heart. I can just visualize it.

I have to start writing more modern haiku as I'm still stuck in the 3 lines 17 syllables or less old school format. I truly enjoyed this!
Luv,
Katiemae1977





 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Katiemae

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Perhaps as the brightness of the harvest moon is quenched by the sea, the feeling of defeat and or surrender is that of a broken or wounded heart. Beautiful Haiku, that makes one think on many different feelings and emotions.
RJ

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 27-Aug-2024
    My pleasure
    RJ
Comment from lyenochka
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That's sad. I guess the autumn season with its beautiful moon sinking into the sea reminds the viewer that there is a sadness due to a broken heart. A story well told in a haiku!

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Big Sister

    MariVal 😊 ❤️😘 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
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the fs gremlins left some crumbs in your notes lol

loved the imagery of the harvest moon melting into the sea leaving a wounded heart on shore...

another great haiku - loved that bottom pic!!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Teri7
Exceptional
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This is a very beautiful and very well written contemporary haiku you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Teri. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review.

    Gypsy 😊
reply by Teri7 on 26-Aug-2024
    You are so welcome my friend. I am just so glad I had them to give to you. All of your work is six stars in my eyes! love and blessings, Teri