Surviving Nuclear War
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Comment from lancellot
I think you have a good concept, but the limitation on words makes the story aspect difficult. Good luck.
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"It looks like it. I am going to share what I know and most of it is classified from my time at CIA and FEMA before I retired to become a college professor and based on my extensive reading.
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"It looks like it. I'll share what I know.
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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I think you have a good concept, but the limitation on words makes the story aspect difficult. Good luck.
notes:
"It looks like it. I am going to share what I know and most of it is classified from my time at CIA and FEMA before I retired to become a college professor and based on my extensive reading.
-This is too much, and not normal speech-
"It looks like it. I'll share what I know.
(This says the same and does the job with fewer words.)
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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thanks good comments
Comment from royowen
I have read much science fiction over the years, and have read much of these stories, but I am thankful that lack of knowledge insulates me to a dgree, I just want my grandchildren to enjoy the life I have, beautifully written, with great fictional application, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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I have read much science fiction over the years, and have read much of these stories, but I am thankful that lack of knowledge insulates me to a dgree, I just want my grandchildren to enjoy the life I have, beautifully written, with great fictional application, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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thanks a lot hope that sanity will prevail
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