Please Give Me What I Need!
the world needs it, too...2 total reviews
Comment from kiwisteveh
An apt entry for this contest. Good luck with it.
You've met the 5-7-5 criteria nicely and added a triple rhyme for good measure. Your poem ends strongly with the use of direct address, presumably directed at the one who is going to help you have fun. If only it were that easy!
Steve
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An apt entry for this contest. Good luck with it.
You've met the 5-7-5 criteria nicely and added a triple rhyme for good measure. Your poem ends strongly with the use of direct address, presumably directed at the one who is going to help you have fun. If only it were that easy!
Steve
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
Comment from papa55mike
There are times we need to reel in the fun police some, throughout the world. What a wonderfully written poem, a 5-7-5 that rhymes. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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There are times we need to reel in the fun police some, throughout the world. What a wonderfully written poem, a 5-7-5 that rhymes. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you. I always strive to not infuse vulgarities into my writing.