2024 Japanese Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 80 "~ Cold Morning ~"x
8 total reviews
Comment from RJ Heritage
I can see the little girl, in my mind's eye, as she makes the snowman. Your imagery is quite strong in this one, and the tradition of this culture stands strong, with not much rephrasing. A simple and traditional image of culture.
RJ
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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I can see the little girl, in my mind's eye, as she makes the snowman. Your imagery is quite strong in this one, and the tradition of this culture stands strong, with not much rephrasing. A simple and traditional image of culture.
RJ
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A much more upbeat verse here! The snowman is radiating happiness while winter on the girl's hands is a wonderful way of describing that penetrating seasonal cold. I like the way your font colours seem to represent the snow on the berries on the leaves. Well done, Gypsy! Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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A much more upbeat verse here! The snowman is radiating happiness while winter on the girl's hands is a wonderful way of describing that penetrating seasonal cold. I like the way your font colours seem to represent the snow on the berries on the leaves. Well done, Gypsy! Debbie
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie. I try to write about a variety of things, I'm happy that you like it. I hope you are having a fabulous weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem and presentation caused me to smile. We're having well over 100 degrees temperatures here in this part of Texas. Yet, making a snowman seems great. LOL
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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This poem and presentation caused me to smile. We're having well over 100 degrees temperatures here in this part of Texas. Yet, making a snowman seems great. LOL
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy 😊
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I just tracked the package, and this is what it said, "Latest Update
We could not access the delivery location to deliver your package at 10:44 am on August 20, 2024 in PASADENA, CA 91107. We will redeliver on the next delivery day. No action needed." I guess we'll see.
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That is weird. I don't have it. UPS is not good delivering packages. They ring once and leave. Maybe he rang when we were not home. Usually, (they have to) they leave a note on the door but other times don't. We didn't get a notice. I will let you know as soon as I get it.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was so cute. It made me think about the fun of winter snow. We haven't seen snow in years here where I live. If we get three inches my area shuts down for a day or two. But being so close to the ocean and having the gulf stream close by, snow just blows around us not on us. This was a wholesome image. Enjoyed it. Gretchen
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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This was so cute. It made me think about the fun of winter snow. We haven't seen snow in years here where I live. If we get three inches my area shuts down for a day or two. But being so close to the ocean and having the gulf stream close by, snow just blows around us not on us. This was a wholesome image. Enjoyed it. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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We don't have snow in Los Angeles, we have to go to the hills. It's fun if you don't live in it. Thank you very much, Gretchen. I hope you are having a fabulous weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is very sweet and is filled with vivid imagery. I could see the whole scene unfold before my very eyes. Of note:
with a carrot and scarf
to make a snowman--
(She was either going out to make a snow man or some type of cold carrot soup--lol. Just kidding.)
Well done. I love the photo, but let's not hurray winter. Xo. M
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is very sweet and is filled with vivid imagery. I could see the whole scene unfold before my very eyes. Of note:
with a carrot and scarf
to make a snowman--
(She was either going out to make a snow man or some type of cold carrot soup--lol. Just kidding.)
Well done. I love the photo, but let's not hurray winter. Xo. M
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, M. I hope you are having a fabulous weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
I've made snowmen in Central Park some years ago with my grandsons, but I think we made a mess of it in general. Beautifully written again dear Gypsy, great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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I've made snowmen in Central Park some years ago with my grandsons, but I think we made a mess of it in general. Beautifully written again dear Gypsy, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy 😊
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Well done
Comment from shelley kaye
i've never made a snowman before...
seems like it should be fun...
very cute and happy gogyohka poem with nice cool imagery
thank you for sharing!!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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i've never made a snowman before...
seems like it should be fun...
very cute and happy gogyohka poem with nice cool imagery
thank you for sharing!!
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, I hope you are having a fabulous weekend. We don't have snow in Los Angeles, we have to drive to the hills. Snow is fun once in a while.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Brr. Just thinking of "winter on her hands" makes my hands feel cold. Actually, my hands are always cold so I shock my classmates at tai chi when we have to say thank-you to all our classmates after sparring with them. Lol.
Loved the poem and picture!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Brr. Just thinking of "winter on her hands" makes my hands feel cold. Actually, my hands are always cold so I shock my classmates at tai chi when we have to say thank-you to all our classmates after sparring with them. Lol.
Loved the poem and picture!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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lol winter hands are not fun. I heard tai chi is very good for your body and spirit.
Thank you, big sister. I hope you have a fabulous weekend.
love 😘
MariVal