The Moon and I
fantasy9 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fantasy world under the moon and the magic is happening in your clever and witty poem, I enjoyed this ambient write full of promise, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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A fantasy world under the moon and the magic is happening in your clever and witty poem, I enjoyed this ambient write full of promise, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you for reading my fantasy poem. Elaine
Comment from Ric Myworld
As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But once in a while I find a few extra minutes and it's nice to read a few verses. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But once in a while I find a few extra minutes and it's nice to read a few verses. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Mermaids,
Your lovely poem lifted me to a beautiful place with endless possibilities. (My real life is somewhat mundane). I can picture myself under the moon, conversing with unicorns that you speak of, and swimming with a merman (I never knew this word before reading your excellent poem).
Your poem flows well and is very beautiful.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Mermaids,
Your lovely poem lifted me to a beautiful place with endless possibilities. (My real life is somewhat mundane). I can picture myself under the moon, conversing with unicorns that you speak of, and swimming with a merman (I never knew this word before reading your excellent poem).
Your poem flows well and is very beautiful.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Love your review. Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a beautifull and magical journey you've created! The playful tone of the moon invites brings a sense of wonder. I loved the meeting with the merman - there was a touch of romance! It left me with a feeling so positive - what a delightful escape!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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What a beautifull and magical journey you've created! The playful tone of the moon invites brings a sense of wonder. I loved the meeting with the merman - there was a touch of romance! It left me with a feeling so positive - what a delightful escape!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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I am glad my words made you feel good. Thank you for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from royowen
What a. nicely written and imagined Elaine. My imagination was at its best when I was a boy dreaming in the broad daylight of impossible things, not so sharp these days, but this is a beauty, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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What a. nicely written and imagined Elaine. My imagination was at its best when I was a boy dreaming in the broad daylight of impossible things, not so sharp these days, but this is a beauty, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you for reading and enjoying. Elaine
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
Comment from pome lover
very nice! Now I see where your Fan Story nick name came from. :)
Also, I'm glad to know that you can also see the face in the moon. So many people can't. Of course, it helps to have a good imagination.
A fascinating poem of fantasy written by an exhausted nurse. I bet you are! Anyway, it was an enjoyable read.
Katharine
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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very nice! Now I see where your Fan Story nick name came from. :)
Also, I'm glad to know that you can also see the face in the moon. So many people can't. Of course, it helps to have a good imagination.
A fascinating poem of fantasy written by an exhausted nurse. I bet you are! Anyway, it was an enjoyable read.
Katharine
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you for taking time to read my poem of fantasy. Elaine
Comment from judiverse
MKFlood's artwork is perfect for your poem. This is certainly a flight of fancy. Sometimes we need those escapes. You have imagined a world of blue fairies, unicorns, and mermen. What an adventure. We usually have to have our feet on the ground and then something prompts these imaginary journeys to the moon. I can tell you enjoy writing these imaginary adventures. judi
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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MKFlood's artwork is perfect for your poem. This is certainly a flight of fancy. Sometimes we need those escapes. You have imagined a world of blue fairies, unicorns, and mermen. What an adventure. We usually have to have our feet on the ground and then something prompts these imaginary journeys to the moon. I can tell you enjoy writing these imaginary adventures. judi
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Yes, I love writing these imaginary adventures. Thanks for taking time to read and enjoy. Elaine
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Jes Derry
You create a magical atmosphere with phrases like "tiny blue fairies fly around me one lands on my hand", and "soft whispers in cool breezes". I think if there was a break between the line beginning " come hither..,," and "I walk along...," it would make more sense as I found I had to stop to re read. However it is a captivating read and one I would share with nephews and nieces as it has universal appeal.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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You create a magical atmosphere with phrases like "tiny blue fairies fly around me one lands on my hand", and "soft whispers in cool breezes". I think if there was a break between the line beginning " come hither..,," and "I walk along...," it would make more sense as I found I had to stop to re read. However it is a captivating read and one I would share with nephews and nieces as it has universal appeal.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This poem beautifully captures a whimsical journey under the moonlight, blending fantasy with a sense of wonder. The imagery of the moon, fairies, unicorns, and a merman creates a vivid, enchanting landscape that's both imaginative and serene.
Your use of language evokes a dreamlike quality, and the moon's role as a guide and matchmaker adds a charming narrative thread. The progression from the forest to the sea, and the interactions with the fantastical creatures, is fluid and magical.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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This poem beautifully captures a whimsical journey under the moonlight, blending fantasy with a sense of wonder. The imagery of the moon, fairies, unicorns, and a merman creates a vivid, enchanting landscape that's both imaginative and serene.
Your use of language evokes a dreamlike quality, and the moon's role as a guide and matchmaker adds a charming narrative thread. The progression from the forest to the sea, and the interactions with the fantastical creatures, is fluid and magical.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Love your words. I am honored. Thank you so much. Elaine
