End of it All
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
When someone puts themselves out there enough to share their dream and the other person isn't who they thought they were it can seem like the end. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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When someone puts themselves out there enough to share their dream and the other person isn't who they thought they were it can seem like the end. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much for reviewing.
Comment from patcelaw
This is well written one line poem for the contest and I wish you the very best with all your writing and I wish you the best in the contest. Patricia.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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This is well written one line poem for the contest and I wish you the very best with all your writing and I wish you the best in the contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Thanks, Patricia.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
When a romance ends, and dreams of ever after are shattered, it can be devestating, for a while, until we find our ever after. Nicely done with the eight words you've used in this one Heather. Good luck in the contest,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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When a romance ends, and dreams of ever after are shattered, it can be devestating, for a while, until we find our ever after. Nicely done with the eight words you've used in this one Heather. Good luck in the contest,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much, Valda.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Sometimes giving our love has a double edges sword as losing those we love leaves us with grief and sorrow, I enjoyed your inventive words Heather, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Sometimes giving our love has a double edges sword as losing those we love leaves us with grief and sorrow, I enjoyed your inventive words Heather, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much, Dolly. xxx
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-line poem, End of it All, uses eight words and seems to show regret that a romance ended with a premature parting which left a void to be filled with sadness.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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This one-line poem, End of it All, uses eight words and seems to show regret that a romance ended with a premature parting which left a void to be filled with sadness.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thanks for reading, Bill.
Comment from Ulla
Indeed, Maria Jose. This monostich just says it all. All her dreams were shattered when she had to share her dreams with someone else. Not what she'd imagined. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Indeed, Maria Jose. This monostich just says it all. All her dreams were shattered when she had to share her dreams with someone else. Not what she'd imagined. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Exactly.
I hope you are doing well. x
Comment from BOO ghost
BOO is reading...oh, a One-Line Poem. Shimmery and shattered an unique blend of an alliteration. I will push play, the video below. Learning to dance in the rain is an interesting concept. The picture and background color match perfectly. You must choose words wisely, and you did that! A breakup or losing a loved one is always depressing. I wish you luck in this contest!
BOO!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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BOO is reading...oh, a One-Line Poem. Shimmery and shattered an unique blend of an alliteration. I will push play, the video below. Learning to dance in the rain is an interesting concept. The picture and background color match perfectly. You must choose words wisely, and you did that! A breakup or losing a loved one is always depressing. I wish you luck in this contest!
BOO!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much for your review, Boo.
Comment from royowen
It's a crying shame when people are discouraged by put downs, all people deserve to be be encouraged and lifted up, God loves all people equally, we shouldn't climb up on others. Beautifully written Maria, , blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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It's a crying shame when people are discouraged by put downs, all people deserve to be be encouraged and lifted up, God loves all people equally, we shouldn't climb up on others. Beautifully written Maria, , blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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You're so right, Roy. We should encourage each other instead.
Thanks for reading.
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Well done
Comment from lyenochka
This one-liner opens up possible different interpretations depending on what was shared. Perhaps the "shimmery dreams" were shared with someone and just by telling the dreams, they were "shattered." Or perhaps those dreams of relationship were shattered when shared with someone who did not reciprocate the love? Either way it works with great alliteration. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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This one-liner opens up possible different interpretations depending on what was shared. Perhaps the "shimmery dreams" were shared with someone and just by telling the dreams, they were "shattered." Or perhaps those dreams of relationship were shattered when shared with someone who did not reciprocate the love? Either way it works with great alliteration. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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I was thinking of the second option, but it doesn't matter much.
Thanks so much for reading.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Heather
Great entry for the One Line Poem contest. Good poem form. Nice S alliteration.
I love the presentation.
May you have a wonderful weekend.
Marival ��
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Hello, Heather
Great entry for the One Line Poem contest. Good poem form. Nice S alliteration.
I love the presentation.
May you have a wonderful weekend.
Marival ��
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Hola Marival,
Thanks so much for reading my little poem.
Besos. xxx