Sleigh ride
A ride for lovers21 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
But my darling
I can't take that ride,
You're no longer here
To be by my side.
The ending of this poem really catches us off-guard, this note of sadness where there should be joy.
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But my darling
I can't take that ride,
You're no longer here
To be by my side.
The ending of this poem really catches us off-guard, this note of sadness where there should be joy.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Oh this was such a happy, festive poem but the ending was a sad surprise. Unfortunately, Christmas is a sad time for so many for this very reason. May your memories keep you warm and may the true reason for Christmas bring you peace.
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Oh this was such a happy, festive poem but the ending was a sad surprise. Unfortunately, Christmas is a sad time for so many for this very reason. May your memories keep you warm and may the true reason for Christmas bring you peace.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme, Willie.
-The opening verses set the scene
and create a joyful mood.
-I like the romantic nature of the
ride while snuggling close,
sharing the velour blanket.
-Very well done; I enjoyed reading it.
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme, Willie.
-The opening verses set the scene
and create a joyful mood.
-I like the romantic nature of the
ride while snuggling close,
sharing the velour blanket.
-Very well done; I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this poem, it is so well rhymed and flows so well. I wasn't expecting such a sad ending, it brought
A lump to my throat. Best wishes. Jen.
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I really enjoyed reading this poem, it is so well rhymed and flows so well. I wasn't expecting such a sad ending, it brought
A lump to my throat. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from l.raven
Hi Willie, go ahead and take that ride my sweet
friend...I'm sure your love would be right by
your side...the imagination is a wonderful thing...
and the heart is even better...she would love the ride...
I love your poem you...and love your picture...
very nicely written...Love Linda xxoo
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Hi Willie, go ahead and take that ride my sweet
friend...I'm sure your love would be right by
your side...the imagination is a wonderful thing...
and the heart is even better...she would love the ride...
I love your poem you...and love your picture...
very nicely written...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from nomi338
Ouch! I was enjoying the ride, with a big ole smile on my face. From out of nowhere I was hit with the sad reminder that my "Ride or die" has left me to journey to another place. Now my desire to ride has also died.
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Ouch! I was enjoying the ride, with a big ole smile on my face. From out of nowhere I was hit with the sad reminder that my "Ride or die" has left me to journey to another place. Now my desire to ride has also died.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Douglas Goff
Nicely done, Willie! You really managed to capture the magic of the season in this wonderful little poem!
So many great traditions in the season that bring warmth a joy.
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Nicely done, Willie! You really managed to capture the magic of the season in this wonderful little poem!
So many great traditions in the season that bring warmth a joy.
D
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
Comment from Lana Marie
Awe, nice romantic sleigh ride with your love. Rhyming flowed well in this cozy poem. Sad that they no longer had their loved one to join in sleigh rides. Thanks for sharing!
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Awe, nice romantic sleigh ride with your love. Rhyming flowed well in this cozy poem. Sad that they no longer had their loved one to join in sleigh rides. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
Comment from DonandVicki
Your poem started out in a most romantic way. A sleigh ride with your loved one, but the poem at the end is a heart breaker, the loss of a loved one and only memories.
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Your poem started out in a most romantic way. A sleigh ride with your loved one, but the poem at the end is a heart breaker, the loss of a loved one and only memories.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
How painful it could be to take such a romantic ride all alone. You penned a beautiful and passionate poem of true love and companionship. Well done, dear Willie. I find this fascinating,
'We could watch
A sunbeam,
Bounce off a
Frozen stream.'
Thanks for sharing your romantic journey.
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How painful it could be to take such a romantic ride all alone. You penned a beautiful and passionate poem of true love and companionship. Well done, dear Willie. I find this fascinating,
'We could watch
A sunbeam,
Bounce off a
Frozen stream.'
Thanks for sharing your romantic journey.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024