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That Long Look

Nature at its finest on my walk

4 total reviews 
Comment from bonespur
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This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The rhyming scheme seems good and the subject matter interesting. I love the excitement of hunting. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024

Comment from F. William Lester
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Just a comment: check your contrast between the background and your words. Black words on a dark green background are very difficult to read and might affect the number of votes you receive. It took a while, but I finally made it out. Just a thought. Nice work. Good luck in the contest. Stay well.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
    Thank you for that helpful thought!
reply by F. William Lester on 26-Aug-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, That Long Look, has the proper formatting and freezes this moment when the one with the camera sees the one with the rammer tools. .......

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2024

Comment from Jeremy R
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Nature is almost always a topic people enjoy. It is succinct in its wording. It reflects on basic human curiosities. It creates a type of thought that makes me wonder if the deer is capable of rational thought. He is at peace.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
    Thank you..he is at peace..