My God Leads
he'll see me through3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a well rhymed and metered poem which describes Christianity well.
It shows your faith and reminds us of the reward.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a good day.
Joan
  |
Hi
This is a well rhymed and metered poem which describes Christianity well.
It shows your faith and reminds us of the reward.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a good day.
Joan
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
Comment from papa55mike
Yes, we are the clay and He is the potter of our lives. Please check this line: to shake (shape) and bend. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
|
Yes, we are the clay and He is the potter of our lives. Please check this line: to shake (shape) and bend. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
Comment from bonespur
This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The rhyming scheme seems good and the subject matter interesting. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
|
This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The rhyming scheme seems good and the subject matter interesting. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
