Comment from
PENofFIRE
This is a delightful little poem and I know the child had to have loved It.
You painted a picture with your words where she/he could picture the unicorn just as you described it. That is a sign of a good writer.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And yes the child did love it :)
Comment from
RodG
Unicorns have always been my favorite mythical animal. Your poem will indeed appeal to children who have been told about them. You have described one vividly so a child can see him. Rod
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I tried to really paint a picture with words
Comment from
Jacob1395
I loved the flow of your words in this piece which for me made it really engaging and I loved the imagery of the unicorn. I thought you did an excellent job of bringing this to life. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.