The Prize
My 3 line poem entry2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I admire the sentiment in this three-line poem. This poem was inspiring, and it had the correct syllable count. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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I admire the sentiment in this three-line poem. This poem was inspiring, and it had the correct syllable count. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from judiverse
Easy to read. I'm puzzled by why He is struck out. If you mean that as part of your poem, the word gives you 8 syllables instead of 7, I like the reference to the arcade and prize. This has a bit of intrigue about it. When the key turns and he leaves, the narrator might be wondering if this was the beginning of a great relationship. Or is it the end? Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Easy to read. I'm puzzled by why He is struck out. If you mean that as part of your poem, the word gives you 8 syllables instead of 7, I like the reference to the arcade and prize. This has a bit of intrigue about it. When the key turns and he leaves, the narrator might be wondering if this was the beginning of a great relationship. Or is it the end? Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you!
