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Gifts

a 2-8-2 poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
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I liked your repetition of the word "gifts" in this poem and how they can all be different. I also liked the picture you included. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2024

Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I absolutely love this! The poem effectively conveys the idea that divine gifts enable us to share our own gifts with others. The repetition of "gifts" underscores the theme of giving and receiving, highlighting the cyclical nature of generosity. The structure is clear, with each line building on the previous one to reinforce the central message. The simplicity of the language adds to its impact, making it both accessible and profound.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2024