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To Be or Not To Be

That is the Question.

5 total reviews 
Comment from SimianSavant
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This was a lot more clever than I originally realized, once I read the sign. I didn't notice it because the pink of the sign is almost the same as the background you chose. I suggest picking a different background color, so that the sign stands out a bit more.

Thanks for the humorous read,

🦍

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
    Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate your comments and suggestion.
Comment from bonespur
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This poem seems like a good candidate for the contest. The syllable count is correct and the subject matter is Interresting and you're right everything isn't always as it appears. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
    Thank you for your review. I appreciate your comments and good luck wish. Blessings to you, as well.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Come on that's funny. I don't care who you are. One night stand.
That cracks me up. You are my new favorite. Good luck on the contest. I am still unpacking and organizing. I have eight more boxes filled up with donations. Karen

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
    And you are my new favorite reviewer, Karen! I appreciate you taking the time during your unpacking and organizing to review my little poem. I loved your comments, and I appreciate your good luck wish.
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reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 24-Aug-2024
    U R Welcome
Comment from jessizero
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You did a great job with this poem for the writing prompt. You got the syllable count right, and the picture added to the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
    Thanks, Jessi! I guess this would be an example of the critical importance of the syllable on which you want to place the most emphasis; depending, of course, on which product you're trying to market. I appreciate your comments and best wishes.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 2-8-2, To Be or Not to Be, has the proper formatting and gives a new idea of what a one-night-stand might be indicating when one shows up with other ideas.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
    Yeah, Bill. I guess this pretty much meets the definition of 'double entendre,' huh? I appreciate your review.