Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao!

You got your first vote !

Concise indeed.

I love the expression: a patch of blue: it reminded me of that beautiful film with Sydney Poitier and the blind girl.

You have a positive outlook on life... I would just mope. Alas the glass is always half-empty in my eyes.

I read below you find the pic on Google.

You should try PINTEREST. I just made a quick search and there are at least a dozen stunning pics all without scribbles that you could use.

You can log in with your Google account.

Best of luck !

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024

Great reveiw zanya

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good monostich.
-Effective imagery with "sunless days,"
and a good follow up about looking
for a patch of blue.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024

Thanks for reviewing zanya

reply by Pam (respa) on 26-Aug-2024

You are welcome.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi fellow writer,
This one line shows us a good perspective on life. Always look for the positive and you will be happier.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day and week.
Joan

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024

Thanks for reviewing zanya

reply by dragonpoet on 26-Aug-2024

No problem, Zanya.
Joan