Dad
A letter to my father on my childhood memories.3 total reviews
Comment from RFL
You have bared your soul in this piece, which I hope has been therapeutic for you. I felt your pain and your love at the same time. That can be a great emotional war; which it seems you have won.
Best,
RFL
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You have bared your soul in this piece, which I hope has been therapeutic for you. I felt your pain and your love at the same time. That can be a great emotional war; which it seems you have won.
Best,
RFL
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
Comment from AliMom
A revealing and powerful love letter. Congratulations on your first post and allow me to encourage you to continue writing your heart. It truly has a cleansing effect on the soul. I like your brutal honesty and your sweeping confession of love indicating that faults do not destroy the bond of family. I like the redemptive feeling in the end which feels hopeful and triumphant particularly the line, "but I'm here now, the curse breaker." This has an immeasurable spiritual impact which transcends the secular. I pray life continues to carry you forward and your testimony inspire others.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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A revealing and powerful love letter. Congratulations on your first post and allow me to encourage you to continue writing your heart. It truly has a cleansing effect on the soul. I like your brutal honesty and your sweeping confession of love indicating that faults do not destroy the bond of family. I like the redemptive feeling in the end which feels hopeful and triumphant particularly the line, "but I'm here now, the curse breaker." This has an immeasurable spiritual impact which transcends the secular. I pray life continues to carry you forward and your testimony inspire others.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you for this profound review. Your words are so impactful and meaningful on so many levels.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a very poignant read as you continually repeat that despite everything you still love your father. As you say, this write was therapy for you part of your hoping to move forward without all these emotions. Just a couple of typos
-knight and (in) shining armor
you put your selfish needs before mines (mine)
but im (I'm) here now
Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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This is a very poignant read as you continually repeat that despite everything you still love your father. As you say, this write was therapy for you part of your hoping to move forward without all these emotions. Just a couple of typos
-knight and (in) shining armor
you put your selfish needs before mines (mine)
but im (I'm) here now
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you for reviewing my work and providing such powerful and honest thoughts.
