A Colour of Nature
I hated that colour as a kid, but no longer2 total reviews
Comment from Amelie Johns
I really enjoyed reading your poem. Both my daughters have bright blue eyes which stand out a lot as they have dark features. You have written a beautiful rhyming poem about the color blue and described it in so many contexts. It's clever and fun - particularly the last line. Best of luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Amelie
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. Both my daughters have bright blue eyes which stand out a lot as they have dark features. You have written a beautiful rhyming poem about the color blue and described it in so many contexts. It's clever and fun - particularly the last line. Best of luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Amelie
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you for this positive review, Amelie. I am glad it created a fun time as well as those kind words.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your poem thoughtfully explores the multifaceted nature of the color blue, linking it to various aspects of life, emotions, and memories. The way you weave personal and cultural references together creates a rich tapestry of associations with the color. The transition from positive to more reflective tones effectively captures the complexities of aging and self-perception. The closing lines provide a humorous yet poignant conclusion, highlighting resilience despite the passage of time. Overall, the poem is engaging and reflective, with a nice balance of vivid imagery and personal insight.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Your poem thoughtfully explores the multifaceted nature of the color blue, linking it to various aspects of life, emotions, and memories. The way you weave personal and cultural references together creates a rich tapestry of associations with the color. The transition from positive to more reflective tones effectively captures the complexities of aging and self-perception. The closing lines provide a humorous yet poignant conclusion, highlighting resilience despite the passage of time. Overall, the poem is engaging and reflective, with a nice balance of vivid imagery and personal insight.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Patty, for this positive review. It was a 'fun' assignment.
