2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Ahh, we have a few shy flowers. I don't blame them. Unfortunately, I don't have a shy bone in my body. I didn't until I went to college and then I found myself. Not sure that's a good thing. LOL Once again, your presentation is above all.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Ahh, we have a few shy flowers. I don't blame them. Unfortunately, I don't have a shy bone in my body. I didn't until I went to college and then I found myself. Not sure that's a good thing. LOL Once again, your presentation is above all.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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LoL it's always good to find yourself (*=*)
Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Blushing Blooming Flowers, has the proper formatting and imagines the curious but coy flowers peering through the leaves to see what awaits them.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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This haiku, Blushing Blooming Flowers, has the proper formatting and imagines the curious but coy flowers peering through the leaves to see what awaits them.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
That's cute! I guess the flowers don't really want to be picked. My roses have been blooming slowly because of the sudden changes in temps. Now the real hiding masters are my zucchini!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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That's cute! I guess the flowers don't really want to be picked. My roses have been blooming slowly because of the sudden changes in temps. Now the real hiding masters are my zucchini!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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LoL oh no ... hiding zucchini
Big Sister,
Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Love 😊
MariVal
Comment from RJ Heritage
Reminds me of my grandkids who wo y ld sometimes hide and peek out, trying their best ro scare me.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful Haiku. I like its color tone.
RJ
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Reminds me of my grandkids who wo y ld sometimes hide and peek out, trying their best ro scare me.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful Haiku. I like its color tone.
RJ
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Grandkids are the best.
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Grandkids are the best.
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Vivid word description that pairs with your selected artwork.
Consider play (active verb) instead of playing (gerund).
Consider changing your first line to a red shade. Green in my mind does not hint at blushing.
Mark
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Gypsy,
Vivid word description that pairs with your selected artwork.
Consider play (active verb) instead of playing (gerund).
Consider changing your first line to a red shade. Green in my mind does not hint at blushing.
Mark
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
cute!
and i like how you put the flower line in green and the bush line in red
i think it makes the words stand out more - nice one!
great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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cute!
and i like how you put the flower line in green and the bush line in red
i think it makes the words stand out more - nice one!
great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
I love the fact that the metaphors of nature's behaviours are a brilliant usage of words to reflect behaviour that's usually attributed to human behaviour is a marvellous observational tool in poetry, particularly in short form, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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I love the fact that the metaphors of nature's behaviours are a brilliant usage of words to reflect behaviour that's usually attributed to human behaviour is a marvellous observational tool in poetry, particularly in short form, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Most welcome
Comment from Neonewman
Flowers playing peek-a-boo, clever. When I go out to cut the roses, there's always a few I miss, tucked below the others. Great job, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Flowers playing peek-a-boo, clever. When I go out to cut the roses, there's always a few I miss, tucked below the others. Great job, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Always, my friend.
