Blue
for joy and sorrow8 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
This is an excellent entry in the Color Series poem contest. You've crafted a creative poem sprinkled with with well written verses highlighting and describing the various uses of blue. The monorhyming is perfect with skillfully written lines having harmonious end rhymes.
All the best in the contest,
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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This is an excellent entry in the Color Series poem contest. You've crafted a creative poem sprinkled with with well written verses highlighting and describing the various uses of blue. The monorhyming is perfect with skillfully written lines having harmonious end rhymes.
All the best in the contest,
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Wendy G
This is a clever storyin a poem about love gained and then lost. The rhymes are smooth as is the metre and general flow. Well done. Sending best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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This is a clever storyin a poem about love gained and then lost. The rhymes are smooth as is the metre and general flow. Well done. Sending best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
You've penned an excellent poem using the color blue.
Any shade of blue is my favorite color; you express this very well in your work!
Nice contrast between love and bittersweet sorrow.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Author,
You've penned an excellent poem using the color blue.
Any shade of blue is my favorite color; you express this very well in your work!
Nice contrast between love and bittersweet sorrow.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much--I appreciate it.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.
I see you played a lot with the font to get the blue color wherever you mentioned blue. Yes I noticed that.
You use blue as an emotion which I often do. I often wonder whether people understand what that means.
Then you describe a man who is dressing in all blue and has blue eyes, and who maybe disappointed you, maybe took advantage of you.
But you wanted him nevertheless, and he left. Sad.
So now you're left to pick up the pieces and move on. Hard to do.
I'm pretty sure this is fictitious. In any case, it is well written and communicates clearly what you are trying to say
It has a good rhyming scheme with no set meter
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.
I see you played a lot with the font to get the blue color wherever you mentioned blue. Yes I noticed that.
You use blue as an emotion which I often do. I often wonder whether people understand what that means.
Then you describe a man who is dressing in all blue and has blue eyes, and who maybe disappointed you, maybe took advantage of you.
But you wanted him nevertheless, and he left. Sad.
So now you're left to pick up the pieces and move on. Hard to do.
I'm pretty sure this is fictitious. In any case, it is well written and communicates clearly what you are trying to say
It has a good rhyming scheme with no set meter
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from RodG
This is a delightful take on the prompt and carries us back to the 50s and 60s when some girls chased "bad boys" like this one who broke their hearts. I love how you worked the color BLUE into every stanza. Rod
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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This is a delightful take on the prompt and carries us back to the 50s and 60s when some girls chased "bad boys" like this one who broke their hearts. I love how you worked the color BLUE into every stanza. Rod
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Colorado Owl
This is very clever... and often true! It's so easy for us to rationalize to convince our self that a relationship is wonderful. We eventually see it clearly, and hope we've learned from it. Well done!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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This is very clever... and often true! It's so easy for us to rationalize to convince our self that a relationship is wonderful. We eventually see it clearly, and hope we've learned from it. Well done!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Begin Again
Awesome poem using the word and color blue.... teased the reader with his charm and style, then left popped our blue balloon when he walked away, leaving us broken hearted.
Great poem!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Awesome poem using the word and color blue.... teased the reader with his charm and style, then left popped our blue balloon when he walked away, leaving us broken hearted.
Great poem!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
The poem explores the theme of being captivated by someone's irresistible charm, symbolized by the color blue. The imagery is consistent and vivid, using the color blue to express various emotions and stages of the relationship.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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The poem explores the theme of being captivated by someone's irresistible charm, symbolized by the color blue. The imagery is consistent and vivid, using the color blue to express various emotions and stages of the relationship.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much.