A Moment With Nature.
Nature, the other side of life.5 total reviews
Comment from bonespur
This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The structure and rhyming scheme seem correct. Most people don't realize how important bees are to our survival. Good job and good luck. Have e a blessed day
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The structure and rhyming scheme seem correct. Most people don't realize how important bees are to our survival. Good job and good luck. Have e a blessed day
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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You're right, bees are very important to our survival. Glad you liked this poem.
Comment from RodG
I enjoyed visualizing this scene which could be almost anywhere, but I'm thinking the Deep,South where the Speaker is working hard but takes time out to watch a bee whose work seems pleasurable. I love your use of vernacular. Rod
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed visualizing this scene which could be almost anywhere, but I'm thinking the Deep,South where the Speaker is working hard but takes time out to watch a bee whose work seems pleasurable. I love your use of vernacular. Rod
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Yeah, the scene is in the south and I see it this way, if you're gonna write poetry - you better do it the right way; and put it on paper the way you feel it.. Glad you enjoyed this piece.
Comment from Colorado Owl
Congratulations on your first post! The world would be in a bad way without bees. I love to watch them at work. Well done. (You may want to edit your bio to change "Been waiting poetry".)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Congratulations on your first post! The world would be in a bad way without bees. I love to watch them at work. Well done. (You may want to edit your bio to change "Been waiting poetry".)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Glad you enjoyed this piece: and thanks, for the advice.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Welcome!!!
Your poem paints a charming picture of a busy bee and its essential role in the ecosystem. The conversational tone and rhythmic structure lend a delightful, informal quality to the piece. The use of colloquial language adds a unique voice and makes the poem feel personal and engaging.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Welcome!!!
Your poem paints a charming picture of a busy bee and its essential role in the ecosystem. The conversational tone and rhythmic structure lend a delightful, informal quality to the piece. The use of colloquial language adds a unique voice and makes the poem feel personal and engaging.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Glad you enjoyed this piece, I put my soul in it.
Comment from LaDana Taylor1
I didn't quiet get this poem significance but that bees fly from flower to flower pollinating which is in its nature to do but once I thought on the the Title of your poem I realized that you are an nature observer and notice every Lil detail of your surroundings and that's wonderful.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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I didn't quiet get this poem significance but that bees fly from flower to flower pollinating which is in its nature to do but once I thought on the the Title of your poem I realized that you are an nature observer and notice every Lil detail of your surroundings and that's wonderful.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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If you're not really into nature, I can understand the 3 stars, but thanks for your review - all the same.
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My apologies if you disagree with my rating.but actually I am very much into nature and all God's creation around me I pay attention to everything and honestly I'm in awe of it all I myself im a newbie so there are some writings I don't quite understand it has nothing to to do with the writer.