Dat's Fat!
True story of obedience.2 total reviews
Comment from bonespur
This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The rhyming scheme seems good and the subject matter interesting. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The rhyming scheme seems good and the subject matter interesting. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck luck with that.!!
So it's training lessons for a man by a dog. I hope the man is potty trained because I would hate to see the dog have to potty train him.
They're all sorts of funny possibilities here
Also, it sounds like they were both eating doggy treats. So who's the zombie? I know that the right answer is the man is the zombie, but I'm not so sure it isn't the dog. To meet the requirements of this contest it has to be the dog.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck luck with that.!!
So it's training lessons for a man by a dog. I hope the man is potty trained because I would hate to see the dog have to potty train him.
They're all sorts of funny possibilities here
Also, it sounds like they were both eating doggy treats. So who's the zombie? I know that the right answer is the man is the zombie, but I'm not so sure it isn't the dog. To meet the requirements of this contest it has to be the dog.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thanks for review.
