Bran Nu Dae
Nanni5 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-You have written a good poem with a good topic.
-Very good opening lines set the scene.
-Effective use of personification in the last
two lines as the sun says good morning
and the moon says good night.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-You have written a good poem with a good topic.
-Very good opening lines set the scene.
-Effective use of personification in the last
two lines as the sun says good morning
and the moon says good night.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
Comment from bonespur
This seems like a good candidate for the contest. Saying goodmorning to the day as the sun is rising is refreshing, but it means saying good night to the moon. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
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This seems like a good candidate for the contest. Saying goodmorning to the day as the sun is rising is refreshing, but it means saying good night to the moon. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Where did you get the image from? You're supposed to put some kind of credit even if it's just credit to google.
I like your poem. It seems like that may be true. I'm not sure because I think whether the moon is visible or not is based on the earths position and where on earth it's night.The moon comes out all the time, but the sun keeps it from being seen during the day.
We're just going to say it's a beautiful poem and that the author took poetic license here. But I was still curious about it so I did a little more research that you might be interested in
The moon rotates approximately over 28 days so I guess it would have night time in some of those periods
So technically, there is night on the moon, but it's always on the other side, the side that we can't see. That side would have night 100% of the time
But I'm not going to spoil your poem. I think it's a great poem and that I'm just being over analytical.
Daytime moons are such wondrous sights For some reason, the moon is incredibly much bigger when you see it in the daytime. It always seems to be on the horizon like you're driving towards it if you're in a car
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Where did you get the image from? You're supposed to put some kind of credit even if it's just credit to google.
I like your poem. It seems like that may be true. I'm not sure because I think whether the moon is visible or not is based on the earths position and where on earth it's night.The moon comes out all the time, but the sun keeps it from being seen during the day.
We're just going to say it's a beautiful poem and that the author took poetic license here. But I was still curious about it so I did a little more research that you might be interested in
The moon rotates approximately over 28 days so I guess it would have night time in some of those periods
So technically, there is night on the moon, but it's always on the other side, the side that we can't see. That side would have night 100% of the time
But I'm not going to spoil your poem. I think it's a great poem and that I'm just being over analytical.
Daytime moons are such wondrous sights For some reason, the moon is incredibly much bigger when you see it in the daytime. It always seems to be on the horizon like you're driving towards it if you're in a car
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
Comment from Katiemae1977
This is a fine poem although it seems more like a haiku than a nanni. And a good haiku at that.
. A nanni is a statement. I put down commentary and philosophy because of that.
Also your 2nd and 4th lines rhyme
The rules state no rhyming.
Edit this and I'll be happy to come back and re-rate you.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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This is a fine poem although it seems more like a haiku than a nanni. And a good haiku at that.
. A nanni is a statement. I put down commentary and philosophy because of that.
Also your 2nd and 4th lines rhyme
The rules state no rhyming.
Edit this and I'll be happy to come back and re-rate you.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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A lesson to me; read the rules!! Should be fixed now
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It still doesn't fall under the heading of commentary and philosophy. A nanni is about the human condition. You have nature here. Think of saying something profound. That might help. Read some of the other entries. That might help as well.
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Mystery author
A nice Nanni, well worded and presented. sometimes a short poem can reveal a lot, and this does good luck in the contest
Cheers Christine
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Hi Mystery author
A nice Nanni, well worded and presented. sometimes a short poem can reveal a lot, and this does good luck in the contest
Cheers Christine
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
