Comment from
Tomisin👀
This is such a sweet poem and reminded me of several poems I have read when I was younger.I loved how you used simple language and made use of rhyme too, and I was hoping the ladybug would not die as well.Thank you!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from
jessizero
I think this was a great poem for a child. The ladybug and the mourning dove made an unlikely but lovely pair of friends. I like that you kept it gender-neutral, and I enjoyed your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
Thank you very much for your review! I am thrilled that you enjoyed my poem and the rhymes I incorporated.