Comment from
jessizero
I liked the rhyme, but the prompt specified "no rhyming." I hope you don't get disqualified! This poem was great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
Hi Jessi, thank you so much. I didn't read the prompt properly re no rhyming. I've now amended the entry :)
Comment from
Ice Traigh
The author shares a great message and gets the feeling across succinctly. I could see this on a motivational poster or collection of positive thoughts. Tough writing 150 words on a poem that isn't. ;)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
Thank you for your generous comments and rating.