Unseen
...yet seen...3 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I find this very confusing. Perhaps:
There are things that are unseen
Some we can not really feel
Till we meet face to face
In heaven
My opinion only Karen
  |
I find this very confusing. Perhaps:
There are things that are unseen
Some we can not really feel
Till we meet face to face
In heaven
My opinion only Karen
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from Katiemae1977
Really awesome job here poet. What a great spiritual statement. I suppose it's true and I would take comfort in that.
Best wishes with this powerful entry!
Katiemae1977
 |
Really awesome job here poet. What a great spiritual statement. I suppose it's true and I would take comfort in that.
Best wishes with this powerful entry!
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, Unseen, has the proper formatting, but uses words over again like:
"unseen, not felt" .......... "not seen or felt"
With only twenty-three syllables, I feel there should be few repeated ones.
 |
This naani, Unseen, has the proper formatting, but uses words over again like:
"unseen, not felt" .......... "not seen or felt"
With only twenty-three syllables, I feel there should be few repeated ones.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024