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Teri's gift for Tom

For Tom Shortess, husband of Teri 7

40 total reviews 
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This is quite a project summarizing his dedication to his family. That is an example for all. I'm glad you did not forget any of that. This is a lovely birthday present, a strong tribute.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
    Liz, what a sweet and meaningful review and kind words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for such kindness. You have no idea how much it means to me. Thanks again. Debi
reply by Liz O'Neill on 27-Aug-2024







    ***a sweet smile***
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Happy birthday Tom is a wonderful story in the form of a rhyming poem. I love how Teri 7 is able to get her wish of a beautiful poem that commemorates the life and Times of Tom and Teri 7. I always enjoy hearing of a man or a woman who is totally committed to their family and obviously Tom is. Thanks for everything.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
    Thanks so very much Dan. You have wonderful insight into Tom's life just by reading this poem I think you understood him perfectly. Thanks for the awesome review and words, my dear brother. Thanks for the honor once again of the six stars. It does not ever get taken for granted. Thanks again.
    Lotsa love, Debi
reply by Dr. Nad on 22-Aug-2024
    Not feeling well. I wrote your thank you for this and it disappeared before. I'm on a new machine and hoping that will make a difference. You may see this again.
Comment from Shanbreen
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Debi, thank you for one of your famous birthday wishes to Teri's husband Tom. Happy birthday, Tom. I wish you a happy and long life in the company of Teri and your family.

And thank you, Debi, for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
    Shanbreen, I truly appreciate the awesome comments for Teri's poem for Tom. Thank you with all my heart. You are too kind. Thanks again, dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Debi, what a lovely poem for Tom's birthday. I hope Teri and Tom will enjoy this day. Thank you so much for sharing. I loved the music you accompanied your poem. Ulla xcx

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
    Hi Ulla, I truly appreciate the awesome comments for Teri's poem for Tom. Thank you with all my heart. You are too kind. Thanks again, dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Aussie
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Thank you Debi for writing this special Birthday Wish for Tom. Peas in a pod, Teri and Tom. Both giving praise to our precious Lord God on High. Happy Birthday Tom, every hair on your head is counted by the Lord. K xx

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
    Hi Kace, I truly appreciate the awesome comments for Teri's poem for Tom. Thank you with all my heart. You are too kind. Thanks again, dear friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by Aussie on 22-Aug-2024
    I only take cash...hee, hee. Reviewer extraordinaire. :-) XX this one is free.
Comment from Neonewman
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Happy Birthday, Tom. What an honor that your wife sought a special gift such as this for your birthday. What a blessing. Debi, wow, Teri couldn't have picked a better poet to deliver this message, my friend.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
    Steve, I truly appreciate the awesome comments for Teri's poem for Tom. Thank you with all my heart. You are too kind. Thanks again, dear friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by Neonewman on 20-Aug-2024
    My pleasure, Debi.
Comment from mermaids
Exceptional
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Love your words for Teri's husband. She is one of my favorite writers and people here on Fanstory. Your words are heart felt and have meaning. I also like the song "Long Black Train." It is new to me and quite a great song.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
    Thank you ever so much, Elaine, for the very lovely response and review to Teri's poem for Tom. That was one of the nicest things anyone could say and I appreciate you so much. Teri will love reading this one and so many others as she shows Tom how to read all the kind wishes. Thank you for the six stars, sweet friend. Lotsa love and hugs!! Debi
Comment from Janet Foor
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A wonderful birthday poem to Teri's husband "Tom." We wish him the very best for another great year and for both Tom and Teri, much happiness.
Thank you for writing this birthday poem for Tom.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
    Hi Janet, I truly appreciate the awesome comments for Teri's poem for Tom. Thank you with all my heart. You are too kind. Thanks again, dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Barry Penfold
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Boy you do these poems so well Debi. Another beauty and I am sure you will be in line for many more. Love your rhyming. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
    Hi Barry, I truly appreciate the awesome comments for Teri's poem for Tom. Thank you with all my heart. You are too kind. Thanks again, dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Father Flaps
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Hi Debi,
You've done another terrific job in penning a poem for someone special. I know from experience that this is no easy task. Once I was asked to write the eulogy for the father-in-law of a friend of mine. I didn't know him from a hole in the ground, but I went at it. John told me that, when he read it at the funeral, there wasn't a dry eye in the church. I got a nice surprise gift from his wife in appreciation for my rhymes, and it sits here on my desk... two snowmen fashioned out of clay, one with a tam hat and carrot nose, the other is taller with a cowboy hat and carrot nose. Poor John, he passed away not long after he retired, joining his wife's dad in Heaven. We worked together for 18 years in the parts department at Moosehead Breweries.
I know that Teri will be so pleased with your effort, too. Tom sounds like the kind of fellow every girl would like to marry!
My favorite verse,
"Tom Shortess is the kind of man that makes his Teri proud
A Christian in and out of church; his Jesus voice is loud
He always makes a sacrifice for family and church
A nicer guy you'll never find, no matter where you search"

Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
    My dearest, Kimbob, I truly appreciate the awesome comments for Teri's poem for Tom. Thank you with all my heart. You are too kind. Thanks again, dear friend.
    Love, Debi