Nature Enough
Absorb.3 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
So cute! It's so simple. It doesn't need a picture. I see the bird. I see the plant with flowers. And a philosophical end-statement. And it fits the 5-7-5 syllable format. LOL! It is a haiku.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
So cute! It's so simple. It doesn't need a picture. I see the bird. I see the plant with flowers. And a philosophical end-statement. And it fits the 5-7-5 syllable format. LOL! It is a haiku.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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If we appreciate small wonders, we are more likely to appreciate big wonders. Thank you.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is truly about nature. I would beg to differ that birds and flowers can be spectacular, but they aren't always and in your poem they're not.
And yes, they're uplifting whether they're spectacular or not
I just love flowers and birds and butterflies and cats. I like dogs too, but I can't have one where I am because I'm not able to walk a dog and dog walkers are way too expensive.
Very nice
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is truly about nature. I would beg to differ that birds and flowers can be spectacular, but they aren't always and in your poem they're not.
And yes, they're uplifting whether they're spectacular or not
I just love flowers and birds and butterflies and cats. I like dogs too, but I can't have one where I am because I'm not able to walk a dog and dog walkers are way too expensive.
Very nice
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Let us be uplifted by what is special in nature (or elsewhere), spectacular or not. Perhaps we can agree on that. All the best.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Nature Enough, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that each creature and every growing plant connects us with the world and makes us one.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
This 5-7-5, Nature Enough, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that each creature and every growing plant connects us with the world and makes us one.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Unless we reject such experiences as not being good enough...But that would be our mistake. Thank you for sharing.