Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Breathe, has the proper formatting and brings the obvious sounds of the changing seasons which include the rattling leaves tat are ground bound.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2024

Comment from Caperton Tissot

Exceptional

Beautiful haiku. I can feel the crisp air moving the leaves. Love the analogy to breath. The poem captures the essence of autumn without sounding trite.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024

Caperton,

Thank you for the six star review. Your comments are valued and highly appreciated.

BBye50

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I could feel the chill in the air here as Autumn takes hold and we see the wonderful colours of gold and feel the cool breezes, much enjoyed, a fine Haiku, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024

Dolly,

Thank you for your wonderful review. Your reviews are always welcomed and are lift to my spirit.

BBye50

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your beautifully captures autumn with wonderful imagery. The "crisp winds" and "golden cascades" are great word choices. They capture an almost magical quality. he elegance of your words reflect the quiet beauty of fall perfectly.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024

Michael,

Thank you for your wonderful review. Your reviews are always welcomed and are lift to my spirit.

BBye50

Comment from RodG

Excellent

You describe the change of season very well in this Nature 5-7-5.
Nice use of personification to describe the whispering winds, the dancing leaves, and Autumn's breath.
Rod

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024

Rod,

Thank you for your wonderful review. Your reviews are always welcomed and are a lift to my spirit.

BBye50

reply by RodG on 20-Aug-2024

You are most welcome.