Comment from
Pamusart
Hi, rjuselius
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Nice rhyme there with follow and hollow
And the poem meant something too
There are several kinds of love one is God's love and one is love with another person you can even love a dog or a cat and Iit will show you unconditional love
You love your children but they don't give unconditional loving unless they're very young. That's when they need you the most.
And then you love your grandchildren a lmore than you loved your children because now you can appreciate their cuteness
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
Wise words that resonate with me here, they say love makes the world go round and without it we are doomed. I adore the sentiments in these well chosen words, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024