His Song
A musical love story38 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
I love the peace that the poem brings to the mind of readers. The poem expresses sincere appreciation of true love expirence. Well done, dear Pam. Very impactful.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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I love the peace that the poem brings to the mind of readers. The poem expresses sincere appreciation of true love expirence. Well done, dear Pam. Very impactful.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you, sir for your wonderful and encouraging comments and for this extra star. It is much appreciated.
Comment from Wendy G
That is a very original love poem, and an imaginative write. It's a sweet story of love and commitment, written well and with smooth rhyme and metre. Very well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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That is a very original love poem, and an imaginative write. It's a sweet story of love and commitment, written well and with smooth rhyme and metre. Very well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from Neonewman
This is a magical piece you've crafted well, my friend. I felt the passion and love this musical love story presented. Thank you for sharing your talent.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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This is a magical piece you've crafted well, my friend. I felt the passion and love this musical love story presented. Thank you for sharing your talent.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
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My pleasure.
Comment from juliaSjames
"You rescued me from my own hand,
and, gave my soul a place to land,
Without you holes would fill my heart,
from swords that tear my hopes apart."
For me this is the most creative and impactful stanza in your write. But I hasten to add that I found the entire poem delightful in its charm, construction and composition. The meter carries it along without a flaw.
Thanks for raising my vibrations today with this lyrical offering.
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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"You rescued me from my own hand,
and, gave my soul a place to land,
Without you holes would fill my heart,
from swords that tear my hopes apart."
For me this is the most creative and impactful stanza in your write. But I hasten to add that I found the entire poem delightful in its charm, construction and composition. The meter carries it along without a flaw.
Thanks for raising my vibrations today with this lyrical offering.
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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You are welcome thank you for this lovely review and for your excellent rating
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You are welcome thank you for this lovely review and for your excellent rating
Comment from Barry Penfold
Excellent musical love poem. Image is good and the rhyming top notch.
A really happy and bouncy beat. Thanks for sharing and please take care. Have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Excellent musical love poem. Image is good and the rhyming top notch.
A really happy and bouncy beat. Thanks for sharing and please take care. Have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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You have a wonderful day too. Thank you very much for your uplifting and lovely comments and review.
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely "musical love story." And this couple seems perfect for one another and know true love's song. Even if they are temporarily separated by death, they will always be singing their song. Great metaphor of the song for the love given.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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A lovely "musical love story." And this couple seems perfect for one another and know true love's song. Even if they are temporarily separated by death, they will always be singing their song. Great metaphor of the song for the love given.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and excellent rating
Comment from Colorado Owl
I loved reading this... so many great mental images:
"happiness has shed its rust"
"gave my soul a place to land"
"you're the tick but I'm the tock".
Very well done!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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I loved reading this... so many great mental images:
"happiness has shed its rust"
"gave my soul a place to land"
"you're the tick but I'm the tock".
Very well done!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your kind, encouraging words and for your excellent rating
Comment from nancyjam
A beautiful poetic love story with musical theme. The stanzas are well rhymed and fit the theme throughout. I enjoyed reading it. Nancy
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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A beautiful poetic love story with musical theme. The stanzas are well rhymed and fit the theme throughout. I enjoyed reading it. Nancy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your lovely comments and your excellent rating
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Pam,
Nice lyrical poem. If you've found someone this magical and kind, that's wonderful.
I like your phrasing: 'you gave my soul a place to land';'it's love... tick tick'.
An excellent poem, using music as your muse.
Best wishes, Pam.
Cindy
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Pam,
Nice lyrical poem. If you've found someone this magical and kind, that's wonderful.
I like your phrasing: 'you gave my soul a place to land';'it's love... tick tick'.
An excellent poem, using music as your muse.
Best wishes, Pam.
Cindy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Yes. This is fiction. Thank for your lovely. I appreciate it my
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your poem beautifully captures the deep connection and emotional resonance between two individuals through the metaphor of music. The use of melodies and symphonies to describe your relationship is both original and poignant.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Your poem beautifully captures the deep connection and emotional resonance between two individuals through the metaphor of music. The use of melodies and symphonies to describe your relationship is both original and poignant.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your super lovely. I appreciate it