gorilla be nimble
gorilla be quick4 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
That is seriously challenging!!!! You did a fantastic job! Good luck to you in the No Rules Poetry Contest!! I hope it will gorilla well [I bet you loved what I did there, Simian, didn't you...] for you in the polls. xoxoxo
PS - Did you catch the latest chapter of Gretchen's and my book? You make a cameo appearance in my version!! xoxox
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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That is seriously challenging!!!! You did a fantastic job! Good luck to you in the No Rules Poetry Contest!! I hope it will gorilla well [I bet you loved what I did there, Simian, didn't you...] for you in the polls. xoxoxo
PS - Did you catch the latest chapter of Gretchen's and my book? You make a cameo appearance in my version!! xoxox
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thanks very much -- I only just am getting to comments from over a week ago, and found your reference. I did not realize you were working on a book, though to review it I will need to start from the beginning. Yes, let's come up with another contest like that last one. Ending to a fairy tale maybe? I think someone has sponsored such a contest lately. Hmm. Disney stories that involve zombies and nuclear weapons? Children's books re-rewritten for political propaganda? Great idea. I just need to get my member dollar balance up a little more and it will happen.
Perfect pitch is great for songwriting, and for screaming, as I seem to recall from one of your previous entries. Guessing you might have it?
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No, I don't have it, but my brother did. I have what's called "relative pitch."
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Both are useful but relative pitch is essential for transposition.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Sound like a lot of action for this gorilla. I sure hope he wasn't hurt. LOL Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Sound like a lot of action for this gorilla. I sure hope he wasn't hurt. LOL Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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This gorilla got way too much action in the chase, though the banana was the worse for wear at the end. Thanks Barbara! 🦍
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LOL
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think this format aptly suits the content and energy of your verse. It has fun and drama written all over it as well as a happy ending (at least for the gorilla!). What's not to like? Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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I think this format aptly suits the content and energy of your verse. It has fun and drama written all over it as well as a happy ending (at least for the gorilla!). What's not to like? Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much Debbie and glad you enjoyed,
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These apes are going bananas for a piece of fruit and you made me smile with your quick fire words to create conflict and mayhem, a fun post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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These apes are going bananas for a piece of fruit and you made me smile with your quick fire words to create conflict and mayhem, a fun post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thanks very much Dolly. It was a fun one to write. 🦍