2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "All I Can Ask For"*
18 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
Your poem is great in every sense of the word.
"to love and be loved," is what most people want out of life. A profound concept, using just a few words.
I love the photo! Reminds me of the simple, fun I would get out of a summer's day.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Gypsy,
Your poem is great in every sense of the word.
"to love and be loved," is what most people want out of life. A profound concept, using just a few words.
I love the photo! Reminds me of the simple, fun I would get out of a summer's day.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Rachelle Allen
You're right, Gypsy. Anyone who has these commodities is wealthy beyond measure. Love the picture you found (children are THE best commodity on the planet. I love their ability to find joy in ANYTHING!!) Thank you for this important reminder to always choose joy. xoxo
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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You're right, Gypsy. Anyone who has these commodities is wealthy beyond measure. Love the picture you found (children are THE best commodity on the planet. I love their ability to find joy in ANYTHING!!) Thank you for this important reminder to always choose joy. xoxo
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written contemporary tanka you have penned. You used great descriptive words and great imagery that went well with your words. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written contemporary tanka you have penned. You used great descriptive words and great imagery that went well with your words. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Teri
Gypsy
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I wish I had a 6 because this expresses in such a beautiful way exactly what I wish for. I find it amazing how you got so much into so few lines and concluded it all with children's laughter. Hugs, Verna
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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I wish I had a 6 because this expresses in such a beautiful way exactly what I wish for. I find it amazing how you got so much into so few lines and concluded it all with children's laughter. Hugs, Verna
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Verna
Gypsy
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Oh this is such a lovely poem that just brings a smile to my face. Nature's beauty and the laughter of children are wonderful things to hope for. I love the picture you chose. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Oh this is such a lovely poem that just brings a smile to my face. Nature's beauty and the laughter of children are wonderful things to hope for. I love the picture you chose. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Marilyn
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AMEN!!! That's all any of us can ask, to be loved and to share our love. Children love so unconditionally. Wouldn't be wonderful if adults loved that way. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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AMEN!!! That's all any of us can ask, to be loved and to share our love. Children love so unconditionally. Wouldn't be wonderful if adults loved that way. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Jesse James Doty
So, how much of this colorful presentation is done by you, personally, and how much is Pinterest? I think the sixes you are receiving may be from the array of colorful pictures rather than the tanka itself. I don't know but I wonder. The divine providence and the children's laughter are both great things to have and I agree that to love and be loved is the aspiration of nearly all of us. But which is which and what is what?
You tell me.
Jesse
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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So, how much of this colorful presentation is done by you, personally, and how much is Pinterest? I think the sixes you are receiving may be from the array of colorful pictures rather than the tanka itself. I don't know but I wonder. The divine providence and the children's laughter are both great things to have and I agree that to love and be loved is the aspiration of nearly all of us. But which is which and what is what?
You tell me.
Jesse
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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WTF. ... Jessi, what's up? This is a hurtful review and I don't know why. I've always been nice to you. You are very condescending.
The presentation is 100% done by me. I do get the pictures from pinterest but I use a Paint program to create the effects I want.
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I apologize. You are right I was condescending. I don't know what got into me, my moodiness took over and I am sorry.
Please forgive me.
Jesse
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no worries, it's okay
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I hope so. I wouldn't want to ruin a friendship over one bad review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Your poem points out the things that do make life beautiful. But sometimes we forget what's important. We want the things we can hold in our hands or display for our friends. Those things become more important than the things we hold in our hearts. Beautiful and compelling poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Your poem points out the things that do make life beautiful. But sometimes we forget what's important. We want the things we can hold in our hands or display for our friends. Those things become more important than the things we hold in our hearts. Beautiful and compelling poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen.
Gypsy
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, All I Can Ask For, has the proper formatting and suggests not particularly for what one wants, but more for what one realizes he/she already has.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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This tanka, All I Can Ask For, has the proper formatting and suggests not particularly for what one wants, but more for what one realizes he/she already has.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
That's the best, isn't it? To Love and be Loved and to always enjoy the sound of the pure music of children's contagious laughter. You said it so well and gave credit to God's divine providence.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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That's the best, isn't it? To Love and be Loved and to always enjoy the sound of the pure music of children's contagious laughter. You said it so well and gave credit to God's divine providence.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I'm so happy that you like it.
Love,
Marival
