Comment from bonespur

Excellent

This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The structure and syllable count seem good. Your description of everything just brought it to life. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024

Thank you very much!

reply by bonespur on 17-Aug-2024

You're welcome

Comment from Gunner Lil

Excellent

A very good job in fulfilling the requirements of the contest. An easy read that explains the actions of a butterfly.
A picture would have been a neat addition to this poem.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024

Thank you very much!

Comment from nancy Laine

Average

I enjoyed your poem. I think the second line is short a syllable. But it is easy to envision that butterfly! Thanks for sharing. As I sit on my deck, I'm trying to catch glimpse of one!

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024

Thank you very much!

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This piece of verse was lovely, and your descriptions were nice. I'm not sure it's really about human nature, but I'm not a real poet, so I could be wrong. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024

Thank you very much! I feel that people want to be free like the butterfly.