Tears
atom poem15 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-I agree with you about a good cry.
-A very good opening verse shows the
grief this woman is feeling.
-Good description as her "tears gush..."
-A very good concluding verse shows
how tears can help "douse torment along."
-Very well done; thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-I agree with you about a good cry.
-A very good opening verse shows the
grief this woman is feeling.
-Good description as her "tears gush..."
-A very good concluding verse shows
how tears can help "douse torment along."
-Very well done; thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by and giving me encouragement .I am sorry my reply is delayed .I am unwell.Cant do much typing because of painful finger joints..
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You are very welcome. No problem about a delayed reply. I'm sorry to hear about the pain in your fingers. Hope you are better soon.
Comment from jaded831
We all need to grieve to help us move on. That is what I take from your well written piece. I love your poems, they are short and powerful. This poem creates emotion in few lines. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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We all need to grieve to help us move on. That is what I take from your well written piece. I love your poems, they are short and powerful. This poem creates emotion in few lines. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you once agaiin for these beautiful stars >i am sorry i am delayed in my replying .
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Very nice job on this Atom poem. This is is a new format to me but it looks very interesting amd creative. Thank you for sharing it. __________________________________________________
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Very nice job on this Atom poem. This is is a new format to me but it looks very interesting amd creative. Thank you for sharing it. __________________________________________________
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much .
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Crying releases our anxiety and we shed tears in grief and try and move past the pain. Often grief can be acute at any moment and invoke tears, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Crying releases our anxiety and we shed tears in grief and try and move past the pain. Often grief can be acute at any moment and invoke tears, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much .Crying helps a lot .IN the end we are willing tto have good look at ourselves
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Santha,
This short atom poem shows the effect of grief. It remind tears can help lessen grief if we allow them to.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a grate day and week.
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Hi Santha,
This short atom poem shows the effect of grief. It remind tears can help lessen grief if we allow them to.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a grate day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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THank you very much
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You are most kindly welcome, Santha.
Joan
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written atom poem you have penned about shedding tears to make the burden lighter. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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This is a very well written atom poem you have penned about shedding tears to make the burden lighter. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes Santha, there are many problems in the world, particularly among the innocent, who are victims of man's dark choices, in counties like Yemen and Palestine, who are not at fault, thank you for this compassionate post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Oh yes Santha, there are many problems in the world, particularly among the innocent, who are victims of man's dark choices, in counties like Yemen and Palestine, who are not at fault, thank you for this compassionate post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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I shudder when I think of those in the war trodden places. I pray that these senseless killing would stop.
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Me too
Comment from Barry Penfold
Image great and words powerful. Thanks for the notes and you are correct about having a good cry. Thanks for sharing and all the best in the contest. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Image great and words powerful. Thanks for the notes and you are correct about having a good cry. Thanks for sharing and all the best in the contest. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by
Comment from GWHARGIS
I am unfamiliar with an atom poem. But, this poem was full of emotion. I'm guessing the atom so small but capable of so much is the premise. This was good and powerful. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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I am unfamiliar with an atom poem. But, this poem was full of emotion. I'm guessing the atom so small but capable of so much is the premise. This was good and powerful. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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This was introduced here in the club event .Thanks for stopping by.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the "Put Pen To Paper Potlatch Poetry Club".
You bring up a great social issue and a sad reality. I'm assuming it's about innocent victims of war
Well done
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Excellent entry for the "Put Pen To Paper Potlatch Poetry Club".
You bring up a great social issue and a sad reality. I'm assuming it's about innocent victims of war
Well done
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by .